It's Iambic Pentameter, Bisque - [Matthew]

A little something I wrote a loooong time ago, but still like. I'm almost positive I've never posted it, but if I have, feel free to bust me on it.
I Am Becoming
I’ve figured out my life will not unfold
In neat, clean stages like a butterfly
But unaware pass threshold to threshold
Like symptoms of a virus til I die.
The sum of being young is not to float
Around in the false amniotic sea
In our self-serving, self-destructing boat
Propelled by irresponsibility
To be young is to burn without reprieve
On the hot coals of Almost, Soon, and Hope.
To bleed to death from paper cuts received
When fearless, free we pushed the envelope.
And when afraid I whisper this one thing:
“I am becoming. I am becoming.”
[end ping]

7 Comments:
It's like déjà vu.
It's like déjà vu.
Crap, did I already put this up? Don't leaving me hanging, Andrew.
MP
Is that a sonnet. i thouht Matthew only did limmericks.
Actually I don't think you posted this before. It's just the first time I visited ping after you did there was a glitch in my browser and it was listed twice in a row. Kinda random. Now it's just there once.
Woah, this poem is almost suffocating me with hopelessness. Its dejected rhetoric makes it sound more like something from Erik, than from you. I like it!
If you want something really depressing, check out my latest verbal incarnation... Here
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